I have now composed my Film Trailer script and was able to do so by succesfully annotating my script style models. This helped me understand the correct layout and how to efficiently script for a production. Having done this I could include camera movements, angles, shots and various other script technqiues to provide me with a clear final script which would satisfy my audiences needs.
The Proprietor.
FADE IN:
1. ROADSIDE- DAY
A car pass’s the road from a LOW ANGLE view.
The LOW ANGLE view then focus’s on TEEN1 who is dealing with a flat.
VOICE OVER:
TEEN1:
We got a flat man!
CLOSE UP on TEEN1 inhaling a cigarette.
TEEN1:
And I can’t fix this!
FADE OUT.
2. ENT- WOODS- DAY
PAN the WOODS…
VOICE OVER:
TEEN 2:
I got no bars!
TEEN1:
We can take the shortcut across the woods!
OVER THE SHOULDER shot TEEN2 – TEEN1…
TEEN 2:
Im not so sure man, iv heard things about Strangle Woods!
TEEN1:
That’s ridiculous and who knows, we may just make a night of it.
TEEN1 smirks – FOCUS ZOOM.
CUT TO.
3. ENT- INSIDE WOODS- DAY
CLOSE UP on a ROCK.
One by one each of the three teenagers walk over the rock just capturing the LOWER LEG.
VOICE OVER:
TEEN1:
RICK STRANGLE! That old myth.
Gradually we begin to hear echoed laughter in the BG.
After this there is a FADE OUT and a FADE in and a shot of the VILLAIN’s foot walking over the same rock. EDIT this TRANSITION to signify the VILLAIN.
START NON DIEGETIC SOUND- Suspense Track.
CUT TO.
4. ENT- CAVE- DAY.
LONG SHOT on TEEN(S) with CAVE in the BG.
TEEN2:
I need a break dude, we don’t know where we are.
TEEN1:
No breaks! You hear me!
TEEN1 throws a cigarette to the entrance of the cave in the BG.
TILT SHOT from the CIGARETTE to the VILLAIN standing in the CAVE.
ZOOM in on AXE and SLOW MOTION edit it being rotated in VILLAINS hand.
CUT TO.
5. ENT- WOODS- DAY.
MEDIUM SHOT, CAMERA follows TEEN2 and then stops when TEEN2 turns around.
TEEN2:
What was that?
(PANTING)
TEEN1 enters the shot.
TEEN1:
Its nothing!!
CUT TO.
6. ENT- TREE- DAY
TEEN3 is seen in a MEDIUM CLOSE UP and paces away from the CAMERA, VILLAIN then emerges behind the villain from the tree and a BLUR EDIT is applied whilst VILLAIN raises the AXE.
EXIT NON DIEGETIC SOUND- Suspense track.
DIEGETIC SOUND: SCREEM from TEEN3.
CUT TO.
7. ENT- INS CAVE- DAY
TRUCKING MOVEMENT in the CAVE with VILLAIN 2 holding lit lighter with VILLAIN smiling behind there is only NON DIEGETIC panting SOUND.
CUT TO.
8. ENT- WOODS- DAY
VILLAIN drops AXE onto a log.
FADE OUT.
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